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Tuesday, October 13, 2009

Notes from Group Critique 10-13-09

Derek

It seems like this (skateboard) is harkening back to a particular time.

Skateboard piece, an idea I have had for awhile, and then I executed it.
Have been doing more process/experimentation oriented work, like the paper sculpture.

What is motivating you to work in these different ways? More experimentally?

D: I have been working more from materials. It worries me that I am going to spend all this time putting work into something and then not get that much out of the outcome, whereas if I...

I think getting started is an anxious process. Like this space is a blank sheet of paper. Don’t worry. I think this is a valid way of working, just getting things made, things that you don’t necessarily see as perhaps a legitimate idea but you just try things out and get them out.

D: I was thinking at first about this being more like a treadmill, but it turned more personal, I think with the walkmans etc.

When you say you are interested in walkmans are you interested in other ways, other kinetic sculptures you could make?

Where do you imagine this being? If this was in a white space it may be more interesting. It does really speak to an era, there are a lot of messages music turning the wheels, etc.
The floor is problematic, where it is now doesn’t work. Do you see it in a gallery, on the floor, on a pedestal?

I like the idea of it being higher up, so you could watch the wheels turn and see the top of the deck.

It has a really nice sound when you get close to it.
It sounds like a treadmill.

Are you mourning your youth?

It is sort of frustrating. There is a stuckness, a reference to recurring memories, replaying.
It is lighthearted but at the same time a bit dark, you could look at it nostalgically, or evoking the customs and commodities of a particular scene or subculture, but it also has more going on. (Thank god.)

I was struck by how kinda ridiculous to me. (In a Jan Dibbetts way). When I was a skateboarder, and Discmans came out we all held on to our walkmans because they didn’t skip when you skateboarders.

Are the wheels going the same direction.

This could be a monument to lost youth. Skateboards could be incredibly arty but I like that this one is generic, well used, Is it your intent to use very generalized objects, I notice there are no stickers, brand names etc.

This thing in the middle? The tape? It actually fits.

It actually doesn’t work for me. I didn’t recognize it and so I am spending too much time wondering what it is, without it there I appreciate the simplicity of the piece.
Can you prop it up more by the wheels?

I am interested in how you think this piece ended up being sad? You could play with that, like a small video projection above the deck, as if it is moving, kinda like a sad joke.

I think that it doesn’t need anything else. It is rich as a composition of objects.

I could see a small projection just above it like the view from a car window that is moving but not moving/getting anywhere, so that that sense of frustration is sustained.

D: I don’t really know how much more I want to add to it. Embed the walkmans in the ground.

I think it is important that you have the whole objects, they are so simple, even the tape.

I also agree with the tape, it is a reference to that time and culture – a form of bricolage, diy, kids making do with...
Without the projection it seems more like a clear monument to skateboard/youth/diy etc.
With the projection it would become a kind of character.

About batteries/the problem of cords/How do you sustain the movement: why can’t it just be a duration piece? Change the batteries at night and sometimes it is alive and sometimes it’s dead or running down.

There’s something about that possibility of the death of the motion that is really nice, and really important. The slow death of the batteries seems to attest to the ideas and the sadness you have been talk about.

I really like that element of chance!

I think that the loss of power, the possibility of the batteries dying is in the viewers’ head.
Anytime you have a kinetic element there is that loss of power.

The tape is what transforms it from lighthearted to sad. It needs support.

Seeing a cord would make it less of interest, it would make it less metaphorical, more like an appliance. But if I walked in and it was dead I wouldn’t be drawn to it at all, it would be totally static.

To me one the ways you could solve that problem, can you include that in the title, address the ephemeral nature of the piece.

Put stipulations on how the piece is displayed, a contract for the piece’s constant replenishment. Like Felix-Gonzalez Torres’ pieces.

I think that it has a lot of strong impact for everybody, despite all these things we are talking about working out.

are you targeting an audience? Are you trying to make something that has resonance for any particular people?

Again, I really love the sound, like the skateboard is moving on concrete.

its kind of interesting because in this very studio we had this very emotional conversation about nostalgia. you talk about an urban audience, but its wider than that, it has obsolescence built into it so it is nostalgic to a lot of people.. Are you interested in nostalgia, do you want that to be a part of your work?

I think there are both non-nostalgic elements, and there are other things. I think that the illusion of motion is satisfying enough on one level, it being a skateboard could be left.

I don’t lean toward nostalgia, because you aren’t keeping the walkmans, you are transforming them.

I think it’s totally nostalgic, very connected to that. Cassettes now have the charm back, like typewriters, etc.

I think that it’s not nostalgic because it’s totally a current to reuse/repurpose technology, for fashion, for nostalgia, or just out of necessity.

I don’t think you can get away from it (the n-word), but it is not the only reading.

(conversation about walkmans and hipsters ensues)

You can’t extract that this would be so different if the wheels were new and shiny etc.

How would it change the meaning if the wheels were going in different directions?

I would think first in an innocent viewing of futility.

that’s what’s so striking. honestly I think its intelligent but at first I was like eeh... but when Michelle made the comment about the era it points to and then it opened up all these other meanings.

I could see this piece dominating a whole space.

About the rolled paper sculpture...
You talked a little bit about tinkering but...
D: I thought about it sort of like ceramics, Its not satisfying in the same way I am just experimenting, I don’t know where its going.

Looks like a baseball bat.
There’s at least one of two artists from OCAC where they do these piece that are from NG magazines and then he turns them on a lathe, solid turned paper. It’s the same kind of thing.

I definitely got the ceramics association, it looks like a trimming wedge, thrown on a wheel.

Like miniature architecture. I could see a grouping of them. They are really beautiful.

I like that they are kinetic as well.
Telescopes, so when they are expanded

what about the colors, it looks like there is a plan, my mind looks for patterns.

Brancusi’s endless column, but you are taking common images and creating something.

Innards of marker pens. Just knowing that is awesome.
Could you use the outer elements too so you would know where it came from.\

D: All of this is more in the realm of craft. Coming at craft from a different angle, I have been looking about ways to...

There is something like Cornelia Parker about this.

All of these pieces are about reuse. I think that’s really interesting.


Lori:

dealing with a situation where the titles are really important and how do we deal with important titles in a gallery setting.

yes, the titles are important for at least the first two. (gingivitis, heartburn etc. All the philosophers)

L: I tend to say less if I can...

These are three very different pieces, do you always work in this many media?
I am particularly curious about the leaves painting. What is the connection.

I wouldn’t have thought that these were three natural remedies for the listed ailments.
Are they rendered like the original images?

Have you abstracted them?

reminded me of a natural food store, its interesting that they are all chemically products, but they are using the natural leaf to sell their product, and then you are playing with that.

I don’t know if you are going for humor but I find it funny.

the titles (or subtitles) would be more effective if they were the actual products,

I recognized the shape I had this weird recognition in the back of my mind.

Not even knowing the titles or associations they are aesthetically pleasing, even without attempting to think about the concepts.

I thought of a field guide.

I think rendering it exactly as on the product is very important, for it to work like a trigger.

When you are talking about them you are using the word refreshing. Can you help the titles by calling them ‘refreshing gingivitis’ and so on.

The position of them is directly appropriated from the packaging. On the packaging it’s almost out of place, and now they are plopped on the wall in a similar way.

Tracing a pattern to make a big deal out of it.
Seeing them I kind of felt like they were a puzzle. I knew you were doing something with them, but I didn’t know what. I think that the title being non-wall is a problem for this. Maybe they could be on an adjacent wall.

I think that they also resemble puzzle pieces.

If you had more, every leaf you were able to record, from packaging, then I think there would be the revelation of an absurdity and a system.
I am on the fence about it being really abstracted and doing it more naturalistically. Have I ever told you to look at Heidi Cody’s work? (colored pencil drawings of Eskimo pie man)

I think that is interesting too something that works as a painting but has a history of being built off of something else.

thinking more about the emotional connotations of all of these ailments, the embarrassment.

It seems like a lot of advertising is about shame, you are remedying your shame and claiming it in a way. How you are talking about feelings and through your own sense of these leaves, how can you convey this “forests/feelings” thing.

The Persuaders, “Emotional Branding” Frontline documentary. Now ads have developed a connection beyond reason to a product. Cult impulses.

I really liked the qualities of the piece, the way it was made and displayed, but I didn’t get any of the connections to ads, or health, maybe you want to think of another way to show those things besides the titles. Something humorous. If it is important that those connections are made.

The other thing that we have talked about before that’s important to your work – its not each individual piece, it is about the attitude that ties together disparate looking things and media and ideas. What happens in this small collection that don’t have so much to do with each other. It seems like you are interested in those intersections and how things/what things rise to the surface in a collection of pieces, rather than it being really important to make the connection to specific products, etc.

Can you talk about how these pieces relate to each other?

its interesting how you use playfulness to determine the seriousness with which we regard things we encounter. Turning that around. Philosophy is not taken as seriously, when mint leaves on medicated shampoo are taken seriously. The titles really clarify this.

All the women philosophers are like Libras.

I couldn’t help but think about Mt. Rushmore when looking at the phil. drawing.
The bracelets are more like other work you have made, referencing manipulation,

the drawing has more punch, you are laying your method bare, when you think of all the things that these guys have done about representation, and categorization and meaning, and then you have turned it around and wiped out a hundred years of serious thought to make this one connection: that they are all the same sign. In that way it is subtly connected to the leaves, like it could be a marketing campaign. This is the way to make philosophy palatable.

What about the choice of pen and crosshatching. A method that allows for easy reproduction, for greater seriousness.

I don’t think that photoshopping it would work, the high rendering of it makes it, because its sort of a hair brained idea to begin with.

I like the photoshop idea, with the piece the humor resides in the title but if you used a different title it would get closer to images of metaphysics and it would twist it.

But then it would be super obvious, part of the reason its funny is because it subverts your expectations.

Are you against like collaging horoscopes onto the work, or putting the title on the piece. I could see if you added/embedded titles to the pieces then it would separate them. Or if it was a solo show and then you create a forest of these things and connections could be made.

There is an inbetweenness to all of this. They don’t function individually, but the connections aren’t strong too.
visually they are very nice, but...

I think the philosophers drawing is so distilled, your attitude, your approach, your humor all is working so much.

Its worth considering the difference between the way you draw and the ideas you try and get across, don’t be constrained by your comfort processes.

What would happen if you added text pieces “Taurus” “Rolaids”

These feel kind of restrained and less obvious than last years work.

I really like that there is more for us to puzzle out.


Ralph:

the desire for absurdity to go beyond the limits of television.

I really like things happening outside of the picture plane, where there is a little bit of the unseen, just a hint. That’s really successful.

I am interested in how you presented them. They are bright and a bit overwhelming, are you getting into the repetitive images of tv? I could see the car for example all alone on the wall.

Are the narratives intersecting? Where you imagining that they would intersect?
Are we supposed to make assumptions about the group? That would be a reason to have them all in one place.

I feel myself wanting to connect them but I cant’ really.

I connect the ones, at least loosely into a category, that seem to be about group dynamics.

Read the “The Function of the Studio” by Daniel Buren.

Looking at hair color in trying to make the same characters appear.

I don’t put them together and I don’t know what I would get as a plus if I did.
The ones that are the strongest are the ones that have some mystery. The one with god and the surveillance cartoons reminds me of a New Yorker cartoon.

look at the backpage of the New Yorker
remind be of Robert Kullscott paintings

Some of these remind me of those Mexican paintings that are made after you survive a traumatic accident.

Last year you commented that you appropriated the style of working from the visuals of an outsider artist but this is really just the way you work, but I see the connection there, you seem to really be embracing that, the natural way you work.

the ones that were strongest, have some kind of intensity, formally.
putting things together so that I wouldn’t be forced but could bounce back and forth to create a narrative. I think if you grouped them differently you could make miniseries.

the prison seems like you were trying but you just didn’t get there. Perhaps its unfinished or it just lacks some of the intensity of the others.

what about if you didn’t display them this way, what is your scale choice about, they aren’t small or large, they aren’t the same size either. from a narrative stance, from an absurdity stance I agree with the comments.

There are some of them that lose something when piled together, if they were to function on their own I would think that they would need to be bigger.

There is some beautiful painterly color in many paintings.
The top of the one with the car for example.

Re: thesis work and posters for show

Making the work the posters, and making the poster ads. before the work.
Free stock images and text. Is this a bullshit idea?

I think you could find even more enticing, problematic, less confusing, extreme, absurd images.

this reminds me of the ads in the back of artforum.

I like the concept that a swimmer image could have more to do with your work than an image of work.
I don’t know how confusing it would be if the same info. is on all of them.

it sounds fun and also it’s a really simple idea.
that guy in the seventies who would advertise in artforum for these hugely conceptual material works and then the work never happened.

I think that in relation to what your paintings are about, having a work that is your message but also speaks to absurdity, an absurd way of advertising. Somehow making a connection through absurdity to advertise.

Can you add a disclaimer, “this does not necessarily speak to the beliefs or work of Ralph Pugay”? This is and/is not related to your work.

I think this kind of other way of speaking outside of painting seems really important at this time. Looking at your painting is only half the story.

You are making wild claims out of excitement, I like that, this excitement and what it elicits could be a piece in the show itself. Some manifestation of your google museum, not that exactly but something to that effect needs to factor in.

regarding artifacts to go along with all this...art factory...obstacle course etc.
you have these bruce conkle aesthetic that you like makes it so that you don’t have to highly craft things.


Tuesday, March 3, 2009

Critique Notes Tuesday, March 3rd: Vanessa Calvert

A discussion of models for an egg shaped structure to be installed in the MK Gallery show along with other ideas for the lounge space including using the windows as natural lightboxes, with projected images or video.
where people can feel the tension between communion and seclusion.

Egg -pod-like things (5’ high structure, upholstered (tufted?) hanging from the ceiling, occupiable)
The sculptural structure will be like a sensory dep. tank
Maybe comforting, maybe weird, but not so much symbolizing a strict dichotomy like the other proposed installation with pillows.

Did you see the pods in the SAM sculpture park?
Ernesto Neto?
Remember, Amy O.’s (yes!) animation in windows in Jamestown?
Look at the Beth Campbell mobiles.
another artist: Sheila from seattle, showed at LC 5-6 years ago, made fabric structures, some made for one some fore two, swaying structures. Pat wrote review.
Robert Irwin video, the beauty of questions. talks about sensory deprivation.

Are you wanting to play with the boundaries of the work, between sculpture and interior design?

It would be cool with animations/projection on the windows inside and out?

Are you thinking about modernist furniture design? Moon chairs?

The egg sculpture will be a very dominant object in the space. I like that.

This construction is more evocative, a less obvious, placeholder in the dichotomy than the pillows.

Think about other tools to create invitational space, things to make a comfortable space.
What are you inviting people in the gallery to do?

Maybe you should make upholstery decisions prior to building.
You can use the fabric to tie the other elements in the room together.
Make the sculpture collapsible.

When someone gets inside will it be sitting room only, one person, two person?
Would there be sound in it?
A cat purr?

Think about the negative space within the structure, this might determine whether people get in or not.

What about the floor? --Check out Ann Hamilton’s Tropos. for a cool floor.

It’s a kissing booth!

Rather than thinking ‘well this could go here or there’ just think about how you want the inner outer dichotomy to work in the space as a whole.

Let the structure create a space within a space itself.

Do you want us to think about decorated space, and space making itself?

You talk about the dichotomy between virtual and physical space but I am not seeing it yet. How will you bring in the aesthetics of virtual space?

Check out: video: How coffins are made. (youtube)
How places are made for people in captivity.

You don’t necessarily have to have a chock full thing, you are talking about overload and deprivation but it doesn’t mean the outside has to be packed.

It seems the video and sound is really important, you need that contrast, but it maybe too predictable?

What if the walls were painted dark, a loss of boundaries, would mean you are enclosed by light and sound.

Keep the window panel up in the air as an option. Maybe you would want the windows blocked or diffused.

This is so much about the ergonomics/aesthetics of a space, you should look at the history of design of public spaces

Check out Tobias ry. (as Erik)

You can kind of reference in-between places of interior design, instead of just inner/outer, or reference a mid. space so that there aren’t pigeonholed areas of thought.

Check out: Moriko Mori

It sounds fun,
What if you could strap into one and roll around.


Do you want the inner space to be luxurious? or Visually different from outside of the structure.

Will the inside be dark? Can you use color psychology?

What about womb imagery?
Patrick’s “Big Hot Love”

The pod structure is interesting in itself but...write, draw, shoot, collage, think about the exterior space just to give yourself more options

Build a small room within the room, a smaller entrance after the entrance. so you are already asking people to engage in that way?

Remember Holly Andres’, false wall and bedroom door. A distinctive and subtle way that told you were not walking into a gallery but into a girl’s bedroom.
How can you take command of the entrance.

Wednesday, February 4, 2009

Critique Notes for February 3rd: Motoya Nakamura

Discussion of new color portraits of Japanese American WWII Veterans in comparison to the first black-and-white double exposure series
The idea of the gap between the past and the present.

Comments-
-These new color works are great!
-They tell the same story as your black-and-white work but in a better more unique way.
-All of the stories, theory, etc. are compounded into one compelling narrative image.
-The flatness works, the couple become memorialized like one of the portraits on the wall behind.
-the bad lighting works
-YOU DON’T NEED THEIR LEGS!
-Their expressions are great whatever way you cut it. There is no loss of poignancy with a smile.
-Your black-and-white works are beautiful but they are repetitious in them the personal stories, the identity of each veteran is lost. They become all the same person.
-DON’T FEEL LIKE YOU NEED TO BE CONSISTENT FOR THE SAKE OF THE GRANT! They want you to develop your project, which inevitably means to change it.
-“There are no tricks involved with these new portraits. They show a different level of honesty which works.”
-These images are as much about the home as they are about the people--“They are part of it but they are not it”
-nice repetition within the photos, the visual repetition is like the experience of déjà vu or memory that you are often talking about.
-again, you seem to be representing actual people in these images, people who represent an idea rather than presenting the idea but forgoing a true representation of the people.

Suggestions-
-Don’t struggle to make the photos consistent, go in with the hope to just capture their lives.
-Look at the geology of the home.
-Try to not represent a ‘type’ of hero, veteran, soldier
-Separate the two bodies of work. Show the color photos but perhaps put the black-and –white in a book form?
-print the color photos largish-but not too big. Big enough to suggest ‘document’ rather than ‘snapshot’ or ‘family portrait’ but not ‘Jeff Wall big’
-To deal with shooting in the homes of those who are deceased. Document their absence, or their family. Take a picture of where they used to spend their time, or their favorite thing.

Critique for February 3rd: Vanessa Calvert

Discussion of gallery model, screen prints, the symbolic use of velvet ropes/pillows, the idea of analog versus digital and the history of her work with social networking sites etc.

Things of importance-
-a feeling of being pushed / pulled
-navigating between shifting technologies
-pillows, velvet ropes
-‘creating a space’

Questions to consider-
-Are the images compelling? Do they communicate a feeling?
-Why are you interested in presenting this duality? What are hoping to really create?
-Are you trying to use color psychology to affect a particular experience?
-Can you think of a more clear counterpoint to the velvet ropes than pillows?
-How readable do you want these images/installation (plans) to be?
-Why are the pillows on the floor and on the wall?
-What is the system you are setting up?
--pillows-comfort and welcome –analog?
--ropes-unwelcoming boundary –digital?
-are you interested in using sound?
-are you worried about this being too loungy/vip room or do you like it?
-can you expand your symbolic vocabulary?
-have you thought about the vocabulary of pillows? the different things different kinds pillows could say?

Comments:
the images seem:
McDonalds-y
subliminal
hazy
violent
aggressive
tiger stripes
wrong
acidic
“It took awhile for me to see velvet rope”
“I can’t read these images”
“I thought I saw a bicycle”
“Its interesting to see video stills transferred to screen prints”
“reminds me of Warhol’s disaster prints”
“Have you seen Lamont Young’s Rainbow Room”
-"I think you need a stonger counterpoint to the ropes than just the pillows. I don't get anything from the pillows."

Suggestions-
-SHOOT MORE IMAGES/VIDEO so that you have a greater range of points and counterpoints/vocab to work with
-play with scale with the ropes and the pillows
-get a velvet rope prop
-map out every club/theatre in Portland and traverse the city to enter and leave each in a night – video it.
-play with digital vs. analog with the installation i.e. project on the pillows, on a wall painting etc.
-find a way to talk about crossing over, from one thing to another, one way of communicating to another.
-See Pipolotti Rist’s recent project at MOMA
-See Rachel Whiteread’s installed work at PAM
-push a viewer to navigate, be the dialogue between the poles of digital and analog

Wednesday, January 21, 2009

Critique Notes for January 20th: Lori Gilbert

Discussion on the drawings and the idea of doing a catalog of her accumulated drawings titled “Why I’m Giving Up”

Ideas:
-The stopping point in the process.
-Wanting to have some conclusions about ones own work before disseminating it to the world.
-Making art in the 3rd person.

Comments:
“air is overrated. – nice!”
“Well, actually Killer Whale is a breed of Dolphin”
“It seems like you’re into pr”
“for this project, use earnesty.”
“The book reasserts a drama, I give up!”
I think its interesting to “give up” in the context of your self help pamphlets.

Questions:
Is it a working method you want to give up or art all together
Do you feel like you have reached the end of something?
Is the importance of this catalog project, the distribution?
Are you faking?
Can you make yourself/your making a ritual?
Can you make this more specific? Pinpoint one change you want to make?
Are you critiquing the institution of art? the typical structures for art’s distribution/consumption?

Suggestions:
Look up:
Edward Bernays
Bob and Roberta Smith
People who ‘gave up’ in one way or another
–Tehching Hsieh, Duchamp, Linda Montano, Tom Friedman, Baldessari’s burn
use the format of a scripted powerpoint to organize your work/ideas
you should just cook all day then!
GYST
aversion therapy

Tuesday, January 20, 2009

Critique Notes for January 20th: Rebecca Shelly

A presentation of in-progress painting and sculpture about the seed vault in Norway.

Some questions that were asked:
“What is the relationship between icebergs and seed vaults?”
“How can your work exist somewhere between ambiguous and didactic?”
“Why is this work painting?”
“How can you make all of the intricacies of this complex seed situation apparent to a viewer? Do you want to?”
“Will there be accompanying texts? Hidden texts?”
“What is the material connection between icebergs and cardboard?”
“What do you want the experience to be?”

Things to check out:
“Buildings of Disaster”
“Beautiful Evidence” and “Envisioning Information” by Edward Tufte
“Global Networks” the work of Marc Lombardi
“All the People in the World” by Stan’s Cafe

Observations:
I like seeing the weird relationships between the countries.
The situation as you have talked about it today isn’t legibly translated in the work.
I think its abstracted too much
I don’t see iceberg, or countries when I look at the work
I like the way the country’s size correlates to seed donation numbers.
I don’t see countries when they are divorced from the map
The ‘list’ drawing is great! can you put that in?

Suggestions:
Find a system that is more legible, so that a viewer can grasp the situation
embody the apocalyptic feeling of extinction
the map is important, can you put countries flat, on the ground, arrange them by size?
more direct information
seed capsule
can you use resin or glass or ice itself?
let the viewer put things together themselves, you don’t have to tie up all the ends in a didactic way
you could just present the systems and information to a viewer and let them find their own way.

Thursday, January 15, 2009

Critique Notes for January 13th: Steve Baggs

Critique for Steve
January 13th, 2009
Discussion of pages from A Pocket Guide to the US – Mid East Conflict, by Steve Baggs

Steve gave a funny and informative lecture about the history and present situation with the conflict in the Middle East, told from the beak of an Eagle.

There was some talk about the Eagle as a powerful/humorous symbol to choose as a ‘guide’ through the information and the text itself.

There seems to not be much metaphor happening in the book, its pretty literal and straightforward, except for the funny play with symbolism. The eagle as a symbol of American freedom etc.

There was a fair amount of talk about how the book will be translated to or presented in an exhibition. Some ideas and comments follow:

-“I like the lecture format. As you are doing now. Maybe a book release party and you can give a lecture and perhaps do a reading?”
-“I like the glossy prints you have made that would be a nice way to present some of the more summary-esque or visual pages, like the maps.”
-“I like the idea of the fabric prints as well” You mentioned that they are flag-like, “I like that.”
-“Can you display your reference materials?” Even the sketches on the walls are interesting.
-“you are like a translator, taking the illegible information all the positions, history, interests, and forces that are a part of this war(s) and translating it to a language and a form that is readable. Do you think about your work that way, as translation, synthesis?”


People tuned into how they look like religious pamphlets, or religious cartoon bible stories for kids. Also like Lacan for Beginners and other books like that. This seems to be working.

Overall, people seemed into what you are doing, that you are answering a gap in common known information. We should all know this stuff but...
People seemed to be into the visuals you showed and the variety of information you covered, there is a lot to take in though. We all can’t wait to be able to sit down with the book.

Questions:
“Do you feel bad ending this book/pamphlet even as the conflict goes on and escalates. or do you feel like now is a great time to finish and have the book disseminated, with the new administration coming in and all. People can maybe begin to get a grip on the complexity of the situation through your book as it continues.”

“Will you have a bibliography?”
-people want there to be a bibliography

“You have an agenda, right?”

“How much will this be in the end. Will you sell the books?”

“Can you make this available/market them to a high-school US history class? That would be great.”

Tuesday, January 13, 2009

Critique Notes for January 13: Bethany Hays

Critique for Bethany
January 13th, 2009
Discussion of 4 (in progress) paintings
and two accompanying readings
A Little Bit of Loss, by Ellen McMahon and Maternal Rites, by ____

All in all a great response to the newest paintings, the more direct application, immediate/spontaneous quality is working for your viewers.

Some formal comments made about specifically the large horizontal painting: the composition seemed almost too considered to some, while others really liked its compositional aspects, how the objects began to be swallowed in places by the background.

The level of ambiguity was another talking point in the context of all of the work. The newer paintings seem to hover at the right balance of awkward confusion and legibility. There is just enough clarity to identify the ‘humbleness of the items’which seemed very important for people.

There were positive comments about the scale variations, sensual quality, the humor (“being sort of peripheral shots of a child’s job site as if this is what they do for a living.”) People were picking up and appreciating the idea of play, as an way to deal with the battling impulses of order and chaos. The vibrancy of color, the rendering of masking tape, were mentioned. The seems to be a unanimous desire, as viewers, to know that these are paintings of things your children made. There were also comments about the rhythm, balance, and change between all the paintings together, their varying levels of scale, ambiguity, consideration and energy are working. (almost as a sentence)

Some other specific comments:
“I appreciate when the urgency comes through.”
“I like the shaky backgrounds”
It gets across that “sometimes you pick up something and you drop another thing and you just have to move.”

Some conversation was devoted to the actual paintings’ backing/mounting. There seemed to be appeal in their utilitarian structure. They almost mimicked the scrapped together nature of Hollis and Kindred’s (did I get their names right?) sculptures.

There was a fair amount of dialogue about possible titles and/or supplemental text to accompany the work. Some ideas thrown around were:
titles...
-based on the time and date stamp on the back of the original documentation photo.
(though there was some concern expressed about this limiting the read to being about memory, and loss.)
-ask your kids to title the paintings.
-that somehow signify your children as the makers of the work
-that are really just a materials list for the ‘original’ sculpture. This could reflect some of the doubt you have about what some of the objects actually are that you are painting.

artist statements that...
-references the lineage of maternal feminist artists
-loss
-is just a list of materials
-alludes to the transient nature of these chaotic arrangements and the loss that is associated with this process of painting.

Whatever you decide, these things were said and nice to keep in mind:
“Let the viewers ask the questions.”
“Let them be documentary by association.”

There was the idea of casting the ‘sculptures’ in bronze.
People seemed pretty excited about this.
It seems to get across the idea of loss that is so clearly a part of works like that of Mary Kelly, Ellen McMahon, Mierle Laderman Ukeles etc.

Pat reminded/informed us about the reception of a watercolor painting from last year, and how people really responded to its spontaneity etc. She was saying how interesting it is to see that the process is still unfolding, or perhaps has come full circle, completed itself, in this new way that you have found to work that is quicker, fresher, more urgent.

Questions remained:

How much do you want a viewer to know?
Is there a way or an interest in involving your kids in this process more? In a way that doesn’t tip them off and make them self – conscious.
Would bronzing be a tautological addition to an exhibition? Unnecessarily negating your painting process as documentation?
How much of this is utilitarian?